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Emil Sinclair 🐣 ([personal profile] insinning) wrote in [community profile] dappledleaves2023-07-18 01:25 pm
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canon review/voice test for Sinclair


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Canon Review Voice notes

[personal profile] insinning 2023-07-18 09:06 am (UTC)(link)
Prologue:

Soft spoken, needs to be prodded by Rodya to introduce himself properly.
"I-Is...there anything else I need to say? I never worked for a company before..."
Youngest, the "kid", Rodya takes him under her wing so to speak, because she's the one with the least overt hangups (she kinda pokes at all the quiet ones)
Calls himself Sinclair, why does he not use his first name lfmasdpisdofi

(world stuff: Following the "star" is important. Demian mentions this as well in canto III. But what is the star? You need to engrave the aspect, but...

Was Demian always in the intro...
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canto i review

[personal profile] insinning - 2023-07-18 09:18 (UTC) - Expand

canto ii review

[personal profile] insinning - 2023-07-18 12:34 (UTC) - Expand

canto iii

[personal profile] insinning - 2023-07-19 12:28 (UTC) - Expand

canto iii cont'd

[personal profile] insinning - 2023-07-20 12:45 (UTC) - Expand

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